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Re: The Shadow of Paradise (prologue)
Oh, I love newly awakened powers! I'm interested to see how it is that the woman didn't hear her. I've already got my thoughts but I reserve judgment until the ...
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: It Isn't All Princes and Happy Endings
This was great writing! Your grammar is excellent, a trait that is AlWAYS admirable. And the storyline was creative and interesting. I guess my only issue with this piece is ...
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: Part 1 of Ch.1 "Boy behind the counter"
I do like this! It has a lot of potential and I'm interested in seeing what you do with it. A couple of quick suggestions. As the people have said ...
Feb 12, 2008